Some pics of the girlfriend C&C please

[shortpballer]

As always comments and critiques welcome and encouraged.
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[reznap]

You're way past my level and I see nothing wrong with any of them.

What I like especially are her eyes' catch lights, especially in 2 and 3. In 1 it's a bit unnatural but with the unorthodox hairstyle and makeup it works.

I think you did great with the lighting and the focus and... damn I just read your gearlist... badass...

 

[mommy22]

They look great.

 

[adversus]

From a technical standpoint, I can't offer much, they look great.

From a composition standpoint, I'm not a fan of the makeup. She's a beautiful woman, the purple is really distracting

 

[anm90]

From a composition standpoint, I'm not a fan of the makeup. She's a beautiful woman, the purple is really distracting

I have to agree here. When I saw the first picture, my first thought was why does she have two black eyes? Different color makeup would be much better.

 

[rufus5150]

Pretty decent work for a 'fashion' look. My one pet peeve seeing these is if there's an earring hole, either drop an earring in it or shop it out.

 

[khallene]

Great photos...I do agree about the makeup being a bit distracting, however.

 

[Dominantly]

I enjoy them, I find the makeup works well.
I do agree though that the ear hole should be PS out.

Hot GF who doesnt mind posing is probably a great benefit.

 

[JeffieLove]

I agree that they look awesome

You should probably put an NSFW in the title though

 

[Tulsa]

I think these belong in the People section, possibly the NSFW section.
These are not beginner shots.

 

[pcacj]

I hate to sound like everyone else, but these are great with the exception of the make-up. Would you and your girlfriend consider posting a facial portrait without make-up for comparison? If that is considered a request in bad taste, I apologize. I prefer no make-up on all but 3 people I have ever met.

 

[iBats]

You're way past my level and I see nothing wrong with any of them.

What I like especially are her eyes' catch lights, especially in 2 and 3. In 1 it's a bit unnatural but with the unorthodox hairstyle and makeup it works.

I think you did great with the lighting and the focus and... damn I just read your gearlist... badass...

totally agree, also may i comment, your girlfriend is gorgeous.

Secondly you say you're new to photography, pssssh how new?

 

[Dominantly]

I can't believe people are stuck on the makeup.

Never seen any type of high fashion model work before?

 

[dyliebug2]

I loved them! She is very beautiful, I love how her eyes looked in each picture. Great job!

 

[BKMOOD]

The pictures, from a technical standpoint, are nice. However, something was bothering me. Until I read other posts, I wasn't sure what it was. Now I know. It's the make-up. Picture #3 is my favorite. The purple eye shadow in 1 and 2 doesn't work for me at all and it's distracting.​