stranger on campus C&C

[Kofman13]

today i was walking around campus with friends and saw a person sitting as if she was posing, so i asked if i could take some pics of her. This is one of them.
P.S. should i crop out the space on top?

 

[israel09]

The pole going through her head is distracting . that type of thing is usually not good, until you lean how to make it work, such as leading lines. It Makes the eyes drift in this photo though

try a crop right under the windows.

the angle of the subject to camera works though.

-keep at it

 

[Kofman13]

Thanks