strat composition

[Rob A]

hey guys, i have just taken these. the second one was taken on my bed so the background had loads of creases in it. anyidea what i could have done to it other than what i have already done? what do you think of them? thanks guys

 

[iphoto]

Rob both the pics have come very nice. My favorite is first shot for the effect of light, shadow and reflection. I also think first should would look good in color too ...may be you can share for comparison

 

[Rob A]

ok, this is the colour one! nothing at all done to it, just straight from the camera!!! you can see a few creases from my bed in the background in this one, but there wer loads more in the second pic!

 

[olympusmagic]

i like the second one the most. looks like a magazine photo.