Take a look, please!!!

[Gozzila100]

Hello!!! here are some of my photos... please take a look and tell me your opinion.. have i any hope to be better?
What am i doing wrong? What do you suggest to do to take better photos?



i like to take photos when the "models" dont know about camera.. because i think sudden moments ar[FONT=arial, sans-serif] [/FONT]appropriate to take better photos.. am i wrong?

 

[marmots]

well...
i suggest you post a few here that you really like, and try to get some in depth critique

from what i can see you have a lot to learn, it doesn't look like there was any compositional thought put into any of those

i also suggest reading up on composition, im sure someone on here could give you some good resources for that

stick around, take in the critique, and you will definitely improve.

 

[cgipson1]

You will do much better to post two or three shots here... most of us don't like links, and don't have time to go through hundred of links and hundreds of photos everyday! Pick a couple of your best... post 'em with numbers and a little description of how you shot it, why you shot it, etc...

 

[Gozzila100]

ok... thanks.. i think now is better!!

 

[Gozzila100]

any idea?

 

[DiskoJoe]

members only called and they wants their jackets back! j/k

 

[Gozzila100]

sorry i dont undestood you

 

[Frequency]

In all images the sharpness of background objects are distracting.... You must use low depth of field to acquire a diffused b/g.
#1: would have been better, if your model was fully within the frame in a vertical composition; the harshness of light in the street is disturbing
#2: Did you ask your model to "show faces"?
#3: would have been better if there is more space above his head; i like his posing

Added later: #1 will be better even in landscape frame, if some element of interest were thereon the street... like two young ladies walking in, seen not in sharp focus

Regards

 

[AlanE]

if some element of interest were thereon the street... like two young ladies walking in, seen not in sharp focus

Regards

I agree...

 

[Gozzila100]

thanks for comments.. i am sure you are right.

for 1st photo.. i have read in a article about photography, about the depth of the image.. "if you want to take more attractive photos it would be better to give more depth".. that i was apply
for 2nd photo i took 10 photos to have the result!! i like to take photo of my uncle.. so i catch him in that pose!!
for 3rd photo i think you are correct.. what do you think about lights.. why they look like fake? may be because i dont use lenses and i use a simple camera.. so it dont focuse correct!!

i think sudden moments arappropriate to take better photos so i will try more and more to get perfect poses..

PS: Sorry for my English!!

 

[Gozzila100]

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