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Samerr9

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Hi again..

Appologies for posting many photos but I thought let me wrap it up in one
post and post 2 more sets together..

I would like to take your opinion to learn what to avoid in the next shot
(like the sunglasses reflection) and maybe new notes.

Also, I want to print a large print for the first photo but I am confused if
to print the BW or the color. It will be nice if you tell me which you like
more.

Any comment is much appriciated.

Thanks.

Set III
1.
Whitedress1.jpg


1BW.
Whitedress4.jpg


2.
Whitedress2.jpg


3.
Whitedress3.jpg


Set IV
4.
Yellow1.jpg


5.
Yellow4.jpg


6.
Yellow2.jpg


7.
Yellow3.jpg
 
Now these outfits make her look much better. The bw dress is a winner for sure. Last shot is a great pose.
 
Loooove the Bw!!

6 really stood out to me; she looks powerful and confident.
 
too much ambient light. Your shot should have been crisp if you are shooting with flash when she is jumping even with slower shutter.
 
too much ambient light. Your shot should have been crisp if you are shooting with flash when she is jumping even with slower shutter.

Actually it is motion blur in post, I tried without it but it was very still so I added this to show some action..
 
too much ambient light. Your shot should have been crisp if you are shooting with flash when she is jumping even with slower shutter.

Actually it is motion blur in post, I tried without it but it was very still so I added this to show some action..
I'm afraid that's the only image that I'm not fond of in what is otherwise, IMO, a VERY strong set. The problem for me is that we get no sense of her movement relative to her surroundings, and that pose looks, to me at least, like she could be sitting on a stool. The motion blur just makes it look like a mistake. Otherwise though, really good work! :thumbup:
 

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