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Juga

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Took a hiking trip in Costa Rica and a buddy lent me his ND filter. Almost lost all my gear but I think I got a decent shot. Any C&C is welcomed but particularly look for comments on lighting. I am trying really hard for my shots to not look flat.
Mist.webp
 
Nice shot. It does seem a bit underexposed/flat to me...

Mist Before After.webp
 
Thank you. I will tweak it and repost...i was definitely feeling that way about this shot.
 
Mist.webp


Any better?
 
I think? It still looks pretty flat to me, but it could be my monitor. Maybe try to bump up your contrast? Increase blacks and maybe decrease shadows a bit? It still kinda looks underexposed, so maybe bump up your exposure, as well?

Do you have Lightroom? If you do, try to use the dehaze slider a bit, as well.
 
Yes, I will continue to mess with it. There was a lot of mist created by the waterfall which may be why it looks a bit flat because I have bumped up the contrast quite a bit.
 
Mist-2.webp


Last shot...haha
 
Anyone have anything else? I can take harsh comments...just looking to improve.
 
ok. @Juga .. here we go

water up is red, water down is green

Changing brightness, I'm looking at the bright, latest version of the pict, won't fix the problems you have here because you don't understand what you're doing, and you don't understand why the image is flat.
Which is perfectly normal when you're on the path of learning.

Observe light and how it acts in the nature, on the leafs, on the water. observe all sorts of surfaces.. does it reflects? or it's absorbed?
Where does it come from? behind? on the side etc? which direction of the light is giving the depth?
You can experiment with regular objects in your kitchen, you don't need much equipment or money or anything, to understand light, just your eyes.
An apple, pear (fruit with different surfaces) wooden board, knife... etc... set an object on the table, walk around it and observe

Composition is too tight also, allow some room above the waterfall to give us a sense of space

... and I prefer darker version
 
@mmaria, thank you for the honest and open feedback. I can definitely use this.
 

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