Sunr15e - I wanted to try to have a dark background but lighten him so my wife just held my flash to the right of him.
Traveler - Those look great! That's what I wanted but my skills are very limited.
Travler I can see how your edit has helped produce the desired effect. But I assume these pictures were straight out of Camera (SOOC) and as such I can only imagine the effect was wanted SOOC. So I will ask the questions that I know many would be looking to ask or even answer at this stage...and put forward my own ideas.
1. How could the light have been increased on location with the equipment used?
2. Without going to the expense of soft boxes what else could have been used?
3. How far away from your son was your wife at the time the flash was used?
Yes I can see the light you had available was limited. And I can see where you were going with the flash. Understanding light is key to taking pictures in this situation...(I am far from and expert - but I know the more I talk about it the more I learn and the more others have a chance to input their ideas)...so
1. Put the light source CLOSER...it may feel very much in his face...but if the light had been closer...ie just off camera with the flash powered higher you may have filled that helmet with light and filled his face with light. From the lighting produced I would imagine that she was about 90 degrees to him, from the shadow of his arm. Bring the light to 45 degrees get in tight with the light and fill the area you are wanting to see.
2. Take a second person.....set them to the left of shot with a reflector or another flash to fill the area on the opposite side. Flash would be better as a reflector can only work with the light produced by the one flash and that is going to poor and limited from it's location anyway.
3. I Imagine she was about four to 6 feet from him so that he was not feeling as if she was stood in his personal space. To get the light we want and the image we are looking for....we should forget personal space. Our models (friends and family) need to understand that we are training to be the best...(honest we are)... and as such they need to understand the BEST would do it this way. Up close and personal with the lighting and the camera to get the images we need or the client (your family) need to see in an image. treat every picture like it is ONE SHOT make it the best...
Then remember...NEVER depend on that one shot. With Digital we now have a tool we can learn from. The data our camera saves for each shot is a great way to sit back and work out which method was working best and use that for the future. Take more than 1 shot 10 or 20 if you need to so that you can adjust those setting... (20 is too many - but I think you get the idea) Play with the setting until you understand them.
I know some of the above will generate thoughts and ideas. So please if I am wrong or right....TELL US ALL how I am wrong or which bits I got right.
Thanks
SUNR15E