The wounds have healed, so....

hobbes28 · Nov 12, 2004

I thought I'd have another critique.

I really liked this one. I can't say why really but I'm sure ya'll will let me know...good or bad.

Thanks.

Uselessdreamer1 · Nov 13, 2004

i think the back seat that is out of focus is really distracting, but i like the idea of the photo.

2Stupid2Duck · Nov 13, 2004

Can you do the shot again mate? (you have a slight tilt to the right). I'd try leaning forward a smidge. The DOF on the rear seat is fine but it's too far up in the shot. I'd re-shoot rather than crop if you can. Otherwise, crop and rotate a smidge.

I also love the idea of the shot.

hobbes28 · Nov 13, 2004

Is this crop better?

2Stupid2Duck · Nov 13, 2004

LOL. Yes it looks good.

But get out there and reshoot a few ya lazy git. And if you don't mind mate, can you try a few different heights - up and down a bit.

(This is great - if I can get you to do all the hard work, all I need to do is go out and repeat the most sucessful product. LMAO.)