tis me. once again.

[phakimata]

I'm sorry about that. With such a crop it's hard to tell.

 

[Lorielle99]

there is the original. do with it whatever you want

 

[kundalini]

One eye should be clearly evident, which means it would be the left eye since the right eye is in shadow. Having hair across the face is okay, by I want see the soul behind the image.

The wet look can be quite sexy. However it should not be applied to the face as quite evident in the color shot. It glistens the skin and produces high relection which is not sexy. If using on-camera flash, try alternative lighting as it is too harsh or tone it down to 1/128 if possible with a longer shutter speed.

Also, what was your settings? This would be another area to adjustments to get the mood you are after.

Great idea, but I think you can do better. Just my 2 cents worth.

 

[cameramike]

the color is much better. and you could defintly re do it with much more "sex appeal" if you just re position your hair and so there isnt any on the left (really distracts me) and have it so you can see down your body more, so that your neck and maybe upper torso are in the shot.

good idea though

 

[Lorielle99]

i dont remeber my settings. i played around with a whole bunch i happened to like this one the best. i originally wasnt going for sexiness but mysterious-ness. but i guess thats for the public to decide

 

[noob873]

I actually really like the idea of the shot. Only thing is how when looking at it I keep looking for your eyes, its not really obvious where they are.
Put just a little less hair infront of your face and it would be better.
It also seems like it is focused on your hair thats more near your mouth instead of being focused on your eyes (where I feel it should be focused on).

 

[Lorielle99]

i feel you. maybe ill do a reshootthis weekend.

 

[Trenton Romulox]

You should definitely do a reshoot. It's not a bad idea, it was just executed poorly, i.e. it was cropped too close, the composition isn't fantastic (related to the too close of crop), and the face is just too obstructed, even for this kind of shot.

 

[Lorielle99]

this weeked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bahhh =0

 

[cameramike]

glad to hear your going to reshoot !

 

[Lorielle99]

maybe ill do it tonight =0!!!!

 

[Lorielle99]

okay well i wasnt going to reshoot this one i was just going to move on but i didnt want to disapoint my fans. (joking of course) these are the 3 half decent ones. im having mixed feelings. tell me what you guys think. one second ill think they rule then the next ill think they are totally lame. are they better than my first attempt?

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sorry so big but they simply dont look good small. well im off to shower cuz i feel disgusting after this but please tell me what you think!

 

[Lorielle99]

.............or not

 

[spiffybeth]

i don't like the reshoot. too much hair everywhere and the strands near your mouth really aggravate me.

 

[dpolston]

the first one is interesting in a hangover kind of way

(I still love ya sweety!)