too far?

[12sndsgood]

So its cold out. not much going on so I have been doing some indoor shooting and trying to work on adding some textures, backgrounds etc. something processing wise I don't do a lot of so let me here what you have to say about this one.






girls-13 by Square1 photography, on Flickr

 

[Designer]

Hmm...kinda "so-so" for me. I realize grunge is iconic among snowboarders, but I think it is almost backward in this presentation. The degree of grunge on the flag is o.k.

 

[Bossy]

I don't mind the grudge but I think the flag is weird in context.

 

[tirediron]

Have to agree. In fact until I read the second post, I didn't even know that was a snowboard. Unfortunately, having said that, I'm unable to come up with any thoughts on how I would improve it, but I think it would have to start with the board being somewhere else in the image entirely.

 

[Derrel]

I think the visual weight of those snow pants is really pulling the shot down...I looked at it cropped, right around the aqua-colored drawstring tie on the waist of the pants, and eliminating much of the pants really helps the shot. As-framed it just feels too bottom-heavy with those baggy snow pants really not helping.

 

[12sndsgood]

They were my pants so I could have fit two of her in them lol.

 

[12sndsgood]

Some good thoughts everyone. When I was looking for something for the background I just started thinking about how it's Olympics time and have been seeing a lot of snowboarding ads for the Olympics etc. USA USA and in it went. again, for this I was more working with just learning the process of changing out backgrounds because it's something I don't do. but at the moment its either black or white which I can gell on the white but just wanted to get some boost in my photoshop skills. here are a few more from the set that I worked around with.

Well was going to load up a few more but Flickr doesn't seem to be cooperating. You can see what I added here, I'll try back later to add them Flickr: Square1 photography's Photostream

 

[12sndsgood]

1.


girls-12 by Square1 photography, on Flickr

2. more typical clean edit


girls-17 by Square1 photography, on Flickr

3.

girls-11 by Square1 photography, on Flickr

4.

Catherine-1 by Square1 photography, on Flickr

 

[Tiller]

Hey, I've got that shirt she's wearing in #2. She pulls it off better though

 

[Designer]

..eliminating much of the pants really helps the shot.

See? Derrel and I are on the same page.

 

[Braineack]

remove the logo on board on #3 and I like that one.

 

[tirediron]

Agree, with that bit of logo cloned away, #3 is an outstanding shot!

 

[terri]

remove the logo on board on #3 and I like that one.

Agreed. Nicely executed!

 

[runnah]

I think I am in love!

Swoon and drool!

 

[Bossy]

Agree, with that bit of logo cloned away, #3 is an outstanding shot!

Agree with this! Love #3.
And I like the flag more now that there is a concept with it, the olympics It works. Now just do more girls with different flags