Better ... might be way large for some, but just fits my screen in one go.
Now I wonder: is this a black and white negative photo, or one taken in black and white mode but digitally, or is it a conversion? If it is the latter, how did you go about converting?
It seems a bit grey all in all, I feel that the subject as much might merit some stronger contrasts. Some real black and SOME real white, where it is to be had.