Trying out the Canon 85 mm 1.2 C&C please

[Raincheck]

Again we just having fun,

We did an other shoot on a budget, dress 10 euro gloves 2 euro long cigarette holder 1 euro necklace 0 euro.
What's important is your comments as we like to improve as much as possible.
We do everything our self's like hair, make-up and props.

You can guess the theme here.



Thanks for your time in advanced,

Rain

 

[Raincheck]

I must say I do love this Canon 85mm 1.2 lens used for the shots above, normally I would take my 70-200mm 2.8. I used 2 speed lights with umbrella's for mobility but next time I’ll check out the location a few days before the shoot and make a plan as I would love to set-up the studio lights.

 

[Robin_Usagani]

Audrey Hepburn?

I think the poses can be better. They do not look very natural.

 

[Granddad]

I agree, the poses need work but you've got the model well sorted (be still my beating heart! :heart: ), the lighting is pretty decent for unplanned location shooting and the budget props look fine.

 

[Raincheck]

Hi guy's,

Thanks for the comments, I have to defend the ladies, girls/models we use non of them have any experience with modelling/posing or what so ever.
They are all friends, work colleagues and so on who are brave enough to do this.

I 'll take the comments on board and see if we can guide our models a bit better the next time.

Thanks again,

Rain

 

[D-B-J]

I'll echo what others have said--the images are sharp, lighting seems good enough, modeling is alright. For me, the modeling needs the most improvement. She's pretty/well dressed, but these images don't seem to convey that sense of richness I think you were going for. Also, why does she never make eye contact with us?!

Jake