Typical?

[lazarus219]

hey,
i noticed there was decent light in my room today, so i had a look around and came up with this:

I liked the shot, but decided to put it up for critique,
Comments anyone?

Thanks!

 

[John E.]

Not a flower person, but I think if your to get a close up of a flower go real close so it totally fills the frame. Same with the shadows, either make it bolder or work on the lighting to lessen it.