There's definitely some good stuff there, but I'm not sure the framing works for me. The top half is more interesting than the bottom, but I feel like I want to see more at the top and left. As a whole, the interruption of that dark vertical band where it goes off the right side bothers me a little and I still feel like I want to see more on the top left. Could be just that I haven't had any coffee yet, so nothing is really hanging together for me yet ...