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Corey Jenkins

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I was looking for some new people to shoot with and came across this guy. Hes into MMA and boxing and I had a few ideas. Here is one of them, check it out and let me know what you think! Rip it up, I know it inst perfect. I added to versions, one with fog and one with out. These are also cropped a bit, if you think uncropped would be better let me know.


1. No fog
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2.
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As a lady.......lol:lmao: I want some light hitting him in the chest!! Put some light on the abs and chest!!!
He worked damn hard to look like that!! It's your job to make sure I can see it!!!
 
The crop is a little too tight. I also find it a little strange with the super sharp background. You should at least blur it a bit to offset the main subject. I agree with the lighting, the core of the body is a little too dark, can have more detail definition.
 
Did you take any holding your camera sideways? The image could be more powerful if you included more of his abs that he worked so hard on.
 

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