Valentine D&C

[Trever1t]

_POR0590-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

Cropped


_POR0590-Edit-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

#2


_POR0528-Edit-2 by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[limr32 1]

Her boobs are uneven. It's the first thing I noticed and now I can't NOT notice it.

Hey, if you're going to include that much cleavage, even a straight woman's eyes are going to go directly to it.

As I always say on these portrait shots, I don't generally take portraits so there might be elements of lighting that wouldn't occur to me, but to my untrained eye, everything else seems to be well-done.

 

[tirediron]

Very attractive woman in lingerie; hard to go wrong. I think there are a few details that could be improved; the little threads on her straps could be cloned out, as could the clips near her shoulder. I agree with Limr about her breasts; whether this is a result of her being asymmetrical or posing, it does give the image a slightly unbalanced look. I think either cropping below the breasts or above would work better. GREAT lighting and processing though!!!

 

[Trever1t]

It's the pose, yes. Thanks for the comments. I am working on a cropped edit now, it's not quite as breasty but accents her face more

 

[Trever1t]

How's this?


_POR0590-Edit-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[limr32 1]

Looks great to me! :thumbup:

 

[Robin Usagani]

It needs a hair light man.

 

[tirediron]

It needs a hair light man.

Really? Looks fine on my monitor.

 

[Trever1t]

Robin just likes to be the devil's advocate. Model was flat on her back, laying on a rug. No way to have a hair light anyhow

 

[Robin Usagani]

Robin just likes to be the devil's advocate. Model was flat on her back, laying on a rug. No way to have a hair light anyhow

Use lighter rug then hahaha.

 

[tirediron]

Robin just likes to be the devil's advocate. Model was flat on her back, laying on a rug. No way to have a hair light anyhow

Use lighter rug then hahaha.

The real question is, did it match the drapes?

 

[Robin Usagani]

Model was flat on her back, laying on a rug.

I wish I can see how you shot her. It would have been an interesting photo.

 

[Trever1t]

I actually am on a step ladder leaning over her. It would be an interesting image...

 

[Trever1t]

_POR0528-Edit-2 by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[tirediron]

VERY nice Trever!