Waterfall C&C

[RPK617]

Taken at Red Butte Gardens on the University of Utah

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[tirediron]

C&C per req: It's a nice image, but I think it would be even stronger if you concentrated only on the background waterfall. Crop out the little bit of white, featureless sky above it, and get yourself into a position closer to the fall.

 

[bazooka]

Except for the rocks at the top which are blown out, it's a bit dark for my taste. It feels like it's tilted as well.

 

[D-B-J]

Except for the rocks at the top which are blown out, it's a bit dark for my taste. It feels like it's tilted as well.

I agree. It lacks some punch.

 

[RichardsTPF]

Vertical orientation would concentrate on the fall and the water at forefront?

 

[jasonphoto]

pretty good,well done

 

[RPK617]

Way late getting back to this thanks for all the C&C, background on this I had my 35 prime lens the evening I took this, it was taken from a footbridge, with camera resting on the footpath to get as much of the far fall and the rocks at the base, here is the Exif data:

Camera Nikon D60
Exposure 2.5
Aperture f/20.0
Focal Length 35 mm
ISO Speed 100
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Flash No Flash
Metering Mode Center-weighted average
Light Source Fine Weather