As always, nicely done. Just one nag: The script that's shown--is that a tattoo? Something written on the fabric? It bothers me because it seems out of place. Other than that, I like the second one the best, despite the blown out bit of fabric right under your chin (bunched up in your hand).
Thank you for the comments. I did notice the text, its actually writing on my shirt. I just had an itch the other night to experiment in the studio with lighting and some crazy material I recently bought.....wasen't too concerned about my shirt. Just wanted to mainly play around with my lighting Thanks for noticing though. I might do another series of this when I can think of a neat concept I want to interpret.