linpelk
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- Jan 1, 2009
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Any feedback thoroughly appreciated. Thanks
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First thing I noticed was all the vertical lines in the pictures were leaning over to the left...the girl looks nice and straight though.Samanax- I went back and pulled up the straighten tool for the first picture and that front post was ALMOST dead on. I can't believe that you noticed it was SLIGHTLY off. I would have never seen it.
I can't offer any PP advice for this type of color work since I don't do it myself. My friends play around with it but I think they just use the pre-sets in Lightroom 2 most of the time.Photo #2: I don't usually do Sepia too often, but I felt like I had caught such a sweet moment with her but the lighting was terrible (we got to the park a little too early for the "sweet light") but I wanted to save the photo. I was just messing with it to see if the sepia toned down the harshness a bit. I guess it doesn't work.
The second one just feel kind of "old-timey" with the porch and flowing dress I just thought a desaturation might look nice. As I've said many times, I don't know anything about PP so advice is always welcomed. I don't want to make a good (or OK) picture worse.
Thanks for posting them...I do like these pictures a lot more than the ones in the first post. I'm a color-kind-of-guy (BFA Fine Arts - Drawing & Painting).Here they are in their original form:
I will concur on #2. In general, you leave leading room to allow movement within the frame, but playing against type here works. Adults would walk into a frame, kids... they wander off and do whatever they want. Both sepia and color could use a bit of tone work and both could do with some de-hazing, but technical bits aside, it's a really nice capture.
Well, you did good. Our 5 year old's nickname is Zipper. Probably 90% of the shots I have of her is from about her ear back because she is alway running out of my framing, LOL. I definitely need to work on my up close panning to capture her, or work on my sneaking so I can sneak up on her without her noticing :mrgreen:.Thanks for the input. I had the picture framed with room to the right because she was initially heading in that direction, but turned suddenly to the left (thus the dress swing) and I lost my framing. It is SO challenging to anticipate where kids are heading :er:.