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mrjosh

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number 5 has the best comp, could still be better with a wider shot to include more of the sidewalk.
 
hello Josh; welcome :D
Please number your images
The problem i see is regarding composition-the placement of the main object withing the frame; placing them at center is considered a bad composition. That is the problem with #6, #7 and #8.
In #2, the thin triangular strip of land seen at the other end, kills the image; placing the plant diagonally is a good idea here
In #3, the stones in the foreground are blurred and they are heavy too. Such a thing is a visual disturbance and even if beautiful things are beyond there, they won't get good attention
Both your landscapes are lovely. The first of this may said to lack a point of interest...but the colors are the POI here and so it works
Avoid flash on flowers as far as possible( i too sometimes use flash on them ;) )
The last but one image is good for nothing (sorry; i am harsh on this ;) )
The last image is colorful, but tomatoes are not sharp...and i did not like the diagonal barrier ...what is that?

Regards :D
 
#6 is the most interesting to me. I can see it hanging on a wall in a nice big print.
 

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