soufiej
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First of all, hello! I’m pretty glad to be a part of this fabulous Group of people (and photographers).
A couple of months ago I purchased my first DSLR (Nikon D5100) and a beautiful 35mm f1.8 lens. I want to learn, by my own, how to improve in the art (science?) of taking photos. I know almost all the basics: what is shutter speed, diaphragm, ISO, little of composition, etc. Now, I want to get deeper understanding of the camera and the techniques, but the thing is that I don’t know where to start, what subjects I have to take into account, and a steady curve of learning.
Could you please point me in the right direction, and help me to make a list of subject so I don’t forget any?
Here are some of my pictures: Flickr damian.demasi s Photostream
There are numerous threads similar to your own all over this section of the forum. There are even a few links to similar threads at the bottom of this page. The "right direction" will be found in those threads as everyone eventually needs the same basic information. So do read what others have said and you'll find a wealth of information and suggestions to pull from.
Two rough suggestions I would make to anyone beginning in photography would be; 1) use your camera regularly and 2) work on only one thing at any one time. First, if you were learning a new language or taking up a musical instrument, you would want to practice virtually everyday for at least a few minutes. Ten minutes each day is time better spent than three hours every other weekend. Second, take one aspect of your work and see where you can take it today. Photography is a unique mixture of technology and the ability to envision how light and shadows can play to your benefit through standard compositional tools and knowing when best to bend those rules. You develop those skills largely through using them and being critical of your own work. Like the student guitarist, the recording of your work is the greatest and often the most startling instructional tool you have at your disposal. Of course, recording your ideas is what photography is all about. now you simply need to learn how to be critical of what you've done. Do, though, work on only one thing each day. A guitarist will learn, say, the blues scale faster and have greater retention of the scale if they practice just the blues scale today. Up and down the neck and diagonally across the neck. Ascending and descending, just the blues scale. If they jump from the blues scale to the Dorian scale and then the Mixolydian scale and back and forth and back and forth without any great plan, they get virtually nowhere faster than any other method. Learning the blues scale then as it relates to music, gives them an anchor with which they can hear the relationships. As with photography, when you change one thing, you affect another. You need to isolate what it is you're changing to be effective at your self instruction. So, even if it's just that you are going to work on, say, shutter speed or metering variables today, only work on shutter speed or metering variables for the majority of your work. Defining what has changed in a single variable makes for faster learning and less confusion sorting out after the fact what did change to affect the result you prefer.
Looking over your collection of photos, I would say a few things should be on your mind. First and foremost, virtually every shot appears to have been taken with a very small aperture setting. The focus looks as though your camera had an "infinity" setting and you were uncomfortable moving off that one setting. The few shots where you have blurred the background so the subject matter stands apart also look as though you have a generic "portrait" setting which you fall back on. This gives your collection an either "this" or "that" quality that doesn't say you have a nice DSLR. The same results could have been captured with a fairly inexpensive compact camera. You need to explore the range of DOF which is allowed by your nice DSLR and its very fast lens.
Next, while your shots are pleasant and not lacking so much in composition, it would seem you are seeing mostly the same ideas in your head before you shoot. You are finding the same images interesting though taken as a collection they don't hold interest when they all have a similar appearance. You have a building in front of you and you shoot a photo of the building. OK, why? Why would I care to see a bunch of photos of buildings you came across when they mean nothing to me? Building. Building, Building. Building from an angle. Building from the front. Another building. Again, unless all you want are shots of buildings that are of little to no interest to the observer of your photography, you'll need to change how you see and think about buildings. Why should I care about "this" building? Is there some architectural detail which is of value beyond just the fact it's a rather large building? If so, show me that detail. Show me that building under different lighting conditions. IMO, photography is about capturing an "event" in time just as an audio recording is about the performance as it exists right now. Not the performance tomorrow or last year. What is the event which you want me to exam that you saw occurring and captured in a photograph? A building which has stood for decades isn't, on its face, much of an event. How the light plays across some detail of the building might be.
Show me the line(s), the direction in which you want my eye to travel, the negative space surrounding the subject. Keep me looking at your shot rather than simply moving on from another photo of another building. Are there repeating patterns which you find interesting? Show me those. Show me some thing about that building that strikes me as possibly not the same shot any tourist would have taken while on the bus. A decent rule to follow as a beginner is to wait for at least 30 seconds, and maybe even more, to consider what you are about to photograph. If it will simply look like a travelogue image, why bother? You need to be more creative in what you see and then show us what you've seen so that we might remember that image for more than the time it takes to forward to the next image. As is, your catalog has very little which makes me want to stay on one shot any longer than the rest.
Finally, your initial work shown in your images doesn't have much in the way of dynamic range. No highs and no lows, all medium values. Sort of like talking in a monotone or playing an instrument for use in an elevator. Where's the drama? Where are those portions of your shot which leap off the page? Where are those dynamically opposed bits which hide from easy view? Where you have shadow, you have shadow, nothing more. Highlights are not greatly displayed in your work. Almost as if you only go out shooting when it's overcast. Possibly, you need to learn how to work with the exposure compensation control but all of your shots have a similarity - a drabness and flatness of light and shadow - that doesn't, IMO, occur in nature and should not be occuring in each shot you take.
Most of all, I think, you need to begin thinking about what you can show us that is unique. We don't need another middle of the road, dynamically flat shot of another large building. What can you find that no one else has likely found before? Show us that. Be different than the thousands and thousands of photographers who have seen that same flower or that same building or that same landscape before you got there. It's not an easy thing to learn since the easy shot has become so conventionally ubiquitous we accept it as a good shot and hurry on to the next good, not great, shot. However, what you've shown us so far isn't what can be achieved with a high end DSLR and lens.
Soufiej, thank you very very very much for that analisis and those advices. Of all the pictures I took, just a few have made an impact on me and made me feel something (the ones of the lighting storm). What you say is what I'm looking for, to find the way that my pictures tells a story, and nos only look "standard". I will work in the originality of the shot, and the message that I want to tell with that shot.
Again, thank you.
Glad you found the post helpful. As an addendum to The Traveler's suggestion regarding shooting a tree, building, etc., I would change the idea around a bit. The Traveler has far more good advice than I can give but think about this, I don't care about what YOU FEEL about a tree. You may feel, "That is the ugliest tree I have ever seen." On the other hand, I may feel, "That is a fascinating tree because it is all gnarly and nasty and yet the light and shadows play across its multiple trunks and peeling bark in a way which suggests the intricacies of nature at its very best." Now, not to be rude but, if you felt the tree needed to be photographed because it was ugly and I felt your photograph portrayed the greatest example of nature's diversity, I simply don't see what you are seeing. Nor do I really care what you felt. What you saw doesn't really mean anything to me because "this" moment is my own, it's no longer your's. I look at things from my own perspective and can't possibly determine what you were actually feeling at the time you took the photograph.
Let's say you are playing Hamlet and you are acting out the torment of a son betrayed by his uncle and mother in the face of a dead father whose value has now been taken by a usurper. If, by some strange chance, I see a very spoiled young man who has returned from a world tour on his father's dime to a world he no longer fits easily into and refuses to accept, for me the experience of the spoiled brat takes precedent over your interpretation of the troubled youth. And, should you as an actor ignore the possibility of my reaction to the character, you will likely go for the simplest, most easily obtained interpretation available. Which, IMO, will leave your character study somewhat flat and lacking in dynamics, as if you never actually thought so far as to consider Hamlet as anything other than beset upon. You can do Hamlet in Elizabeathan garb, in Roman togas or as Wild West cowboys. Even putting Hamlet in a modern political context ignores the fact each audience member has the capacity to explore the character's actions in their own way. A single viewpoint, "I'm playing Hamlet as a 1920's gangster", makes for a pretty boring production when that is the extent of your analysis. A character study which has many open ends to the many touch stones familiar to the audience is, IMO, far more interesting and has far more potential to be effective with the audience.
If you were to take a photo of a line of demonstrators and a police line out in front of the Capitol building where a well know politician was speaking, depending upon my previously established biases and background, I might feel one way about the demonstrators or I might feel the exact opposite. Unless your intent is solely to project a set perspective - your own, you are there only to record an event and nothing more. You are willing to forgo your own emotions which in turn, will make your shot more powerful since it can then be seen from any of an infinite number of perspectives, each unique to a single, individual viewer. It's the viewer who matters, not the photographer.
Therefore, your "feelings" about the tree are equally invalid as a touchstone for those viewing your photos. If, say, photography is about recording an event, then you are really a photojournalist. You step back and observe but you do not interpret for the viewer. You leave as much as possible up to the person viewing your photo to decide upon based on their experiences, not your's. They don't have your experiences so they can only guess at what your intent was if you place yourself at the forefront of the image's purpose. As such, it is not your job to "feel" anything, it is your job to present an image which will encourage the viewer to linger, to look more deeply and to create the event's story in their own mind and from their own experiences. So the question then becomes not how you feel about "the tree" but how many ways can you think might the viewer feel about your image. Similar to taking those 30 or 40 or 60 seconds to consider how you might frame a subject, taking equal time to consider how your viewers might think about the event you've captured is, IMO, good advice. Put yourself in someone else's shoes for the moment and consider what might be the most impactful way to describe the event to someone else.
Also, I would suggest you select an interesting object, something which has some details to play with. Go out and take a photo of that subject right now. In two hours, take another photo of the same subject from the same location of your camera and with mostly the same settings on your camera; same focal length, same focus point, same height, same distance, etc. Do the same for the next several hours, every few hours taking the same location shot as the available sunlight defines the subject. If you have a house with large overhanging eaves or a deep front porch, this would be ideal. The trunks of a crepe myrtle would do equally well. You decide what you are going to study. The more dramatic and dynamic, the better. Take these photos every few hours for the next several days through bright sunshine and semi-darkness of dusk or dawn. On clear days and on shady days. Same photo, the only thing that changes is how the available light operates with your subject to create new ideas and new dynamic lines to follow and shapes, contours and features to study.
After a week or so, collect all your photos side by side and compare how the available light has made the same subject different, more or less compelling, more or less emphatic in its place in the world. What is different? Why is it different? Then once a month, for one day, do the same exercise. Now, as the year progresses, the sun's position related to the tilt of the planet on its axis will have altered your subject as seen through the lens of your camera. In January the sun sits lower in the sky while in June, July and August the sun reaches its zenith only to begin again its annual descent back down to low on the horizon where it reveals what is hidden beneath those eaves, on the porch or behind the curve of that stone. Finally, really seriously study what only available light has done to your subject over this time and begin to understand what available light has to offer you as a photographer.
For those of us who are not paid photographers with the funds to spend a week in one spot waiting for just the right moment, for just the right shot to be taken, we must deal with the available light we find at any one time of the day. If you are not fully aware of the effects of light and shadow on your subject though, your shots will tend to have that same similarity of the tour bus rider given ten minutes off the bus to take whatever shot you can find. IMO one of the greatest virtues a good photographer can have is patience. Patience and the ability to see another interesting shot around the corner which is being influenced by the dynamics of light and shadow rather than just snapping a shot of the same time of day every 10:30 AM tour bus arrives and the same basic look to every shot they take in their ten minutes time.
Diversity! I don't want to see the same thing everyone else has seen. Show me what you see and make me think about what I see.
Since you have a nice camera, it might be beneficial to have a very, very cheap, very basic camera also. Carry it with you so you can snap a shot anytime you see something of interest. The basic limitations of the fixed lens, minimal variables camera should force you to think more about how to see what you are photographing. The camera will make many settings which you can't alter. When looking at those images of an interesting this or that, think about how you would have set your DSLR to make a better statement.
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