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jwbryson1

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Can somebody with a better eye tell me what's wrong with these shots? The first looks a bit yellow to me, but I could not figure out how to adjust it in LR. The second just looks washed out.

Suggestions? Thanks.

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Actually, I see an excess of red in the first one, try simply dialing back your red channel slightly. Is your monitor colour-corrected? The second one is a perfectly typical 'sun in the face' shot which a reflector or OCF image right would have helped immensely. You can try some selective burning/dodging which may help. I can't tell in this small size, but there may be some focus issues as well.
 
So the reflector camera right would have lit the left sides of their faces and fixed the shadows?

By the way, I actually sharpened the first quite a bit in LR3 so it's frustrating that it has soft focus. I shot it a f/4.8 to pull them out of the background and I wonder if the DOF got screwed up.

Yeah, I can see that now that the red is really harsh in the first shot. Can you tell me how to selectively choose red and turn it down in LR3? I'll check that now and see if I can figure it out.

Thanks.
 
Second shot has three people, each one looking in a different direction, which hurts the cohesive feeling one tries to portray in a photo of a mother and her kids.
 
Second shot has three people, each one looking in a different direction, which hurts the cohesive feeling one tries to portray in a photo of a mother and her kids.

That's an interesting point Derrel, thanks. It's so hard to get them all to look at me at the same time. I hadn't thought about the reflector either. I was using my SB-700 mounted on the camera because I had read someplace that for outdoor portraits this was considered "acceptable." It seems that I was reading from a bad source.
 
Sorry about the brief earlier post...I was going to say, "Try a clicker", and then the phone rang. Yeah, well, as you can see, baby is looking at her foot...mom is looking drowsy which makes me think mom is going into a blink, or coming out of a blink,while sissy is apparently looking at the photographer. For infants of the baby's age class, one of the easiest tools to use is a teddy bear, or a long, tickly feather, like a peacock, ostrich, or emu feather, or even a feather duster. The toy/feather/clicker method is of course, best for working on a tripod, with a remote release...you can tickle a baby under the chin or on the cheek and lean back toward the camera and then shoot...that will almost always keep all eyes on you.

The real underlying secret might be the idea that these types of shots are EASIEST to capture when shooting from a tripod or camera stand...you envision the camera orientation, in this case, horizontal, then pose the people to fit that camera orientation, then you frame, then focus. In your case, the background is clean and simple, and uncluttered, so framing is very easy and not super difficult to accomplish. With the camera FIXED in a solid position, then it's easy to use any number of methods to get all eyes looking in one direction. A remote release allows you to trip the camera without an obvious shutter triggering movement which will tip off people who are habitual blinkers. You can even use the remote and make a FAKE! fist pump and pretend to mash on the remote button, let them blink, then shoot after their eyes open. Blinking runs in families.
 
I have the wireless remote that works well with my D90, but I'd have to be on the lens side of the camera to activate it, which was not an option here. It sounds like you recommend a cable release that may work better in this situation. Blinking (and yawning) are definitely contagious.
 
Second shot has three people, each one looking in a different direction, which hurts the cohesive feeling one tries to portray in a photo of a mother and her kids.

That's an interesting point Derrel, thanks. It's so hard to get them all to look at me at the same time. I hadn't thought about the reflector either. I was using my SB-700 mounted on the camera because I had read someplace that for outdoor portraits this was considered "acceptable." It seems that I was reading from a bad source.

If you don't have a reflector, I can't recommend this one enough. http://www.amazon.com/110CM-Collapsible-Photographic-Photography-Translucent/dp/B002ZIMEMW

For the price, it's outstanding. Very well made, and does just as good a job reflecting light as much more expensive ones.
 
Worst thing bothering me is the focus
 
They look a bit red to me. Reduce red channel value a bit, using Levels tool.
 
I used photoshop's highpass filter to sharpen a bit and played with the colors...

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