Windows are my new favorite setting (Nsfw)

[cauzimme]

It feels much more romantic (to me) it also helps that both have rocking body!

 

[Donde]

I like the second one but can't tell exactly if the lighting works because the face is mushed. I'm guessing it works though. I think the frame would be better if it were cropped just above the logo and just below the hands showing less of the legs.

 

[JoeW]

I like both photos--the models and the poses.

If I were shooting, I'd be using a much wider aperture so the windows are a blur. But that's my "style" when shooting (narrow DoF). But yeah, I like to use windows as compositional elements (to frame the subject) or to let in good ambient light when it's there.

 

[KC1]

I'd add some fill light to the second at least.

 

[FITBMX]

I don't like the hair over her eyes in #1, but it by no means kills the photo.
I like #2 the best, #1 has a little too much of a "snapshot" look, I think it is the framing I don't like as much.

I know this has nothing to do with you and your wonderful work, but the girl in #1 needs to gain some muscle or weight. She is skin and bones! Yet that isn't necessarily her fault, I know it can be just as hard to gain as it can be to lose weight!

Lovely work as always, thanks for posting!

 

[tirediron]

To be honest, I'm not really "feeling" either of these. The very bright/blown highlights outside the window are a pull on my eye, and the business of the surroundings give the images a cluttered feel. I think as Joe mentioned, a much larger aperture would have made a LOT of difference here. Nice images, but not, IMO, your usual caliber.

 

[cauzimme]

Don't shame bodies!
These 2 ladies are beautiful the way they are
I agree for the larger apperture, but I was unable as I was shooting with my 24-85mm, f4.5 is the larger at 24mm (didn't had a lot of space to use my 85mm) I have to invest in more lenses for sure. The first image is a crop I could have shoot her at 45-50mm but my 50mm is broken, fall off the staircase when a model wanted to help and carry by bag which wasn't closed (my mistake) Will definitively try it next time.

 

[Designer]

It feels much more romantic ..

The models are standing close to a large diffused light. Nothing magical, just good light, but it probably could be duplicated using softboxes.

 

[cauzimme]

It feels much more romantic ..

The models are standing close to a large diffused light. Nothing magical, just good light, but it probably could be duplicated using softboxes.

No there's nothing magical... I just liked the way the window was made, 3 windows next to each other in different angles, it was the first time I shoot somewhere like that and I liked it... Pardon my excitement...

 

[FITBMX]

Don't shame bodies!
These 2 ladies are beautiful the way they are
I agree for the larger apperture, but I was unable as I was shooting with my 24-85mm, f4.5 is the larger at 24mm (didn't had a lot of space to use my 85mm) I have to invest in more lenses for sure. The first image is a crop I could have shoot her at 45-50mm but my 50mm is broken, fall off the staircase when a model wanted to help and carry by bag which wasn't closed (my mistake) Will definitively try it next time.

Totally agree with you, lord knows I am the last person that should say anything about someone else body! I keep my muscles safe under a nice thick layer of padding!

And when I look at her closer (Which is quite enjoyable ) I think the pose makes her ribs protrude a little too much, making her look gont. If she had her arms down (similar to the girl in #2) it would be a more flattering pose, to me. I have never been a big fan of the "Arms stretched over the head" pose, just my taste.
I am sincerely sorry if I offended you or her in any way, I didn't mean to.