Hey guys, so this is my work, I use a Canon EOS 1100D and a 50mm 1.8 but also an Instax 210. What do you guys think? In terms of Editing, the photo in itself etc?
I REALLY like the fifth one down of the girl looking off-camera against the green wall. It breaks all the rules, but it's so...balanced and intriguing. It reminds me of a vinyl album cover or something.
I think the centered composition works for that photo and the last photo though (of the girl sitting on the logs), simply because it looks like it would be good for copy with that nice blank space in the upper right.
But I agree with Binga that many of the others don't hold enough interest in the background and the model to support the centered composition. I think you're like 60% there, because you have an eye. Just keep it up.
Hey guys, I would like to apologize for the very very late reply I've been busy with university and just life really but I found time to take some photos. Thank you so much for your input Binga and Rexbobcat I'll try to take your advice into consideration next time I shoot (hopefully this weekend) in the meantime, some shots I took over the holidays:
I personally think they are not so great but they are my most recent one so yeah
I like the woman looking out the window in the first set and the first one in the second set. Both of these are cropped tighter. If the background is not really important I don't really like to include much of it. I took the liberty to crop a couple of the others a little differently. What do you think?
