I'd say nay as it is right now, but if you cropped it it could be nice. IMO, as a nub, with those lines it may still look nice if you subject was fairly centered...but even if you didn't do that, I think the blown out sun is really distracting, so i would crop that out, or maybe use a polarizing filter, although I have never used one so am not experienced with the exact effects it has, and could be wrong. I think the sun messed with the exposure though. Once again though, I am not very good myself, but i think im learning more every time I analyze other photos.