1st pict, be honest!

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  1. CHRISTIAN2170

    CHRISTIAN2170 TPF Noob!

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    I've looked to all your photos and most of them are really awesome, i'm always watching (and learning) from you guys.
     
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    Alot of yellow... try lighting your subject a little stronger to give it more pop than the background. Your subject matter also seems lost in the image in part to so much background. Im guessing you where going for the lonely subject against a empty background but in this case it is to much. Try a tighter crop. The image looks a bit soft also
     
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    I am having a little trouble figuring out what the object is. Anyway, it needs some more contrast, the image is a little too, shall I say, sleepy. And yes, it is also a little soft. Just for fun, try doing this in black and white and give it some more contrast and see if that looks better. i find object with alot of folds and curves look good in black and white. Expecially since the object has alot of texture.
     

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