Diving right in! CC

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by jca12206, Aug 16, 2009.

  1. jca12206

    jca12206 TPF Noob!

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    Im new here and what better way to introduce myself then jumping right in! Ive been taking pictures for a while but have just ventured into taking pictures for people other than family. Id like some CC on these shots. Thanks!

    How is my b/w?
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  2. shortpballer

    shortpballer TPF Noob!

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    I feel like the black and white is a little over-exposed. I like the others though :)
     
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    jca12206 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks! Does the b/w look more on the grey side?? I have such a hard time with b/w. Sometimes I feel I get it right, others not so much!
     
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    A couple of things that I notice:

    Your signature line extends all the way across the image, and it distracts from the detail in the bottom of the frame.

    I see some blocky editing in the white background of # 3, and that is distracting.

    Other than that, I like the composition and photos. I like the B&W one the best.

    -Andy
     
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    Thanks! In the last one I didnt do any editing to the background, Ill have to go back and see if I can fix it. I see what you are saying though, I hadnt noticed before!
     
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    I like the b/w one the best also....sometimes I feel as though overexposure is okay/cool in b/w shots. I think the overexposure of the shot matches the mood of the photograph. I like your style =)
     

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