like this one how you think about it

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  1. bluewave930

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    Ilike this one how you think about it~give me some comments and critiques please:thumbup:
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    i like it, i feel like its a little dark maybe, but i feel like thats what you were going for, so i think it works well.
     
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    The concept is interesting and the depth of field is good, but there seems to be something missing. I think a crop might be in order.
     
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    The little thing(icepack?) under the hat that reads "Kool" upside down keeps drawing my attention to UNDER the hat where I feel like I am supposed to be looking AT the hat but all of a sudden the bridge and concrete wall form an arrow that draws my attention to the LEFT of the hat.
    The composition seems a tad bit distracting and it makes the subject matter recede into the overall photo. I also think some of the top could use some cropping. It's blurred background anyway, keeping some much of it further keeps me off of the subject. Hope this helps.
     
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    great observation~it means much to me~
    thank all of you for the comments~
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    is it better,now?
     
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    Yeah, I think it helped bring the Hat "up" into the image. Still not centered and boring but more of a focal point as the corner draws your eye to the hat better. I like it.
     
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    Depth of field is good, BG compliments the foreground quite well. I like it.
     

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