New Pictures for C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Josh220, Jun 16, 2009.

  1. Josh220

    Josh220 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I'm still learning, so any information on what I could do to improve is greatly appreciated.

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    2. Moved to new thread for less clutter.

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  2. paulpippin29

    paulpippin29 TPF Noob!

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    I like all of them, but #3 really stands out and catches my eye. Nice work :)
     
  3. sburatorul

    sburatorul TPF Noob!

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    yeah i totaly agree with paulpppp... i just like number 3. you could cheat a little and double layer it, one adjustet for the sky the other for the ground and mask the one on top to get some nice looking fake hdr
     
  4. manaheim

    manaheim Jedi Bunnywabbit Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Some cool stuff... they may be a HAIR underexposed, and you have a bit of dust on your sensor in a couple spots. (about midway left/right on the top in landscape mode, and then almost straight down from there)
     
  5. LarryD

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    I'll disagree with most of my peers and say that your number 4 is the best from a composition perspective.. it tells the story, although it is slightly underexposed and seems a bit soft, a least it does at this compression....

    #3 is exposed the best, but you can't tell if the sand, the sky, or the kiosk should be the focus, so it is somewhat chopped up to the viewer...
     

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