Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Tyson, Dec 24, 2006.
Too lame, I think. Does it do anything for you. It's just an old oil well, off the beaten path.
Okay I like this why I have no idea. It strikes me a Courier and Ives on crack. The style is like one of their greeting cards but the subject is so very anti sweet and lite that it is shocking. So yeah. I'm not sure about the compostion ordinarily but the house and the mobile homes ect in this almost greeting card look is somehow fascinating.
If you were trying to portray an abandoned rig, you've included far too much.
I agree with Torus ^^, too cluttered, no real focal point. But dont listen to me, im new here.
To me there is too much so it's hard to find a focal point. What was it that drew you to this scene? If it was just the well I think you've got too much competition.
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