The wounds have healed, so....

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by hobbes28, Nov 12, 2004.

  1. hobbes28

    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    I thought I'd have another critique. ;) I really liked this one. I can't say why really but I'm sure ya'll will let me know...good or bad. :D

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    Thanks.
     
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    Uselessdreamer1 TPF Noob!

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    i think the back seat that is out of focus is really distracting, but i like the idea of the photo.
     
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    Can you do the shot again mate? (you have a slight tilt to the right). I'd try leaning forward a smidge. The DOF on the rear seat is fine but it's too far up in the shot. I'd re-shoot rather than crop if you can. Otherwise, crop and rotate a smidge.

    I also love the idea of the shot.
     
  4. hobbes28

    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    Is this crop better?

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    2Stupid2Duck TPF Noob!

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    LOL. Yes it looks good.

    But get out there and reshoot a few ya lazy git. And if you don't mind mate, can you try a few different heights - up and down a bit.

    (This is great - if I can get you to do all the hard work, all I need to do is go out and repeat the most sucessful product. LMAO.)
     
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    Picksure TPF Noob!

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    IMO, a little better focus on the dash would make it.

    I love the use of B&W on this forum.
     
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    Love it.
     

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