1st engagement pics

[tommyboy]

A few engagement pics of my niece and her fiancé. Constructive comments appreciated.

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[mommy-medic]

Watch the cropping of hands and feet and uneven lighting in the shade (him holding her), other than that good set!

 

[tommyboy]

Thanks. Will watch those crops. I used a fill flash on just about all because it was very sunny and almost at midday.

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[Eveamlizya]

Same as previously said...watch the hands, feet, elbows, etc. I love the gate shot (just those feet!). Good shots otherwise. Also, in the B&W one...the fade-in is pretty harsh...

 

[camerateur]

yeah they're nice!! I don't have much extra to offer they covered the cropping of limbs and the vignette (too prominent for my taste!!)
also I see a little extra dead space in some. for example in the one with the green grass bokeh at bottom, I'd crop a bit of it off.. my eyes keep getting led to the grass because of how much of the frame it takes up. but that's just one girls opinion!
good job in general!

 

[elizabethysmom]

I love the second one - and yes the foots chopped. I'm a chronic amputator too!!!