1st timer (nsfw)

[skier06]

Hello everyone,
Im new to the forums here and relatively new to photography in general.
this particular subject is something i just yesterday decided to give a go to see if its something i have an eye for at all so i appreciate any and all feedback
thanks

 

[Josh220]

#1 I had to look at it for a few seconds before I realized it was her shoulder on the right. I thought it was a deformed breast at first glance.

#2 I don't like the "squished" look.

Are these self portraits or of someone you know? If so, try to re-compose the shots and post up your re-do's here.

 

[K_Pugh]

I don't know, I think the "flaw" in the first one is what makes it interesting - Depends what you're after I suppose.

 

[skier06]

ouch! bummer
they are of my gf actually so we will give it another go. i wasnt sure what i was after really....she was just on her side so i asked her to try to keep the bottom half up and lay her shoulders back......we never noticed the "deformity"
thanks for your comments guys:thumbup:

 

[Josh220]

ouch! bummer
they are of my gf actually so we will give it another go. i wasnt sure what i was after really....she was just on her side so i asked her to try to keep the bottom half up and lay her shoulders back......we never noticed the "deformity"
thanks for your comments guys:thumbup:

I don't know if I would say it's bad. I just wanted to point out it took me a few seconds to realize that it was her shoulder. If you are satisfied with that, then it's fine. I just wanted to point it out.

 

[skier06]

its cool Josh:thumbup:.....thats why im here....we were there so we see it differently of course. thanks for the comments, we need the outside perspective

 

[Dcrymes84]

hell i like it cause its showing tits lol j/k the pics are good.

 

[Josh220]

Skier, is she opposed to showing more of her body than her breasts?

 

[anything you synth]

The first picture rules IMO

 

[skier06]

glad somebody likes it :thumbup:

 

[Josh220]

glad somebody likes it :thumbup:

Anymore shots?

 

[Jeffro]

I liked the first one too and I like cause it took me a few seconds to figure out what I was looking at! to me it makes it more interesting!

 

[Christina]

I liked the first one too and I like cause it took me a few seconds to figure out what I was looking at! to me it makes it more interesting!

agreed, its not your classic shot, and it may be for some but not others, i deff think you gave it some thing more than normal to consider.

 

[Moonb007]

The lighting quality is good and so is the contrast. I think you need to work more on the poses, they seem a little thrown together. Like a couple of others, it took me a few seconds to figure out the first ones angle. I think its a great start for a 1st timer, but with great room for improvement, keep it up.

 

[gopal]

second one u tried and made good, it means there is a potential in u....first was difficult to understand as the body is turned to her left and there are a lot of blemishes....try to clone out blemishes....and before any shoot use some powder to smoothen her body....u can carry on successfully.

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