2 photos, 1 slightly NSFW --- CC Desired.

[Virtuosos]

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I know the 2nd one is slightly under-exposed on her left (right side), so I tried to edit it somewhat...but I am an idiot with photoshop lol.

That's my attempt at editting the brightness somewhat... lol :/

Anyways, I am looking for CC. The first photo her hair may be alittle distracting? Not sure (hense why I am posting lol).

 

[Trever1t]

hell yeah!

Oh, mybad...nice portraits.

 

[butterflygirl921]

her hair isnt distracting its her boobs

 

[D-B-J]

In the first shot, she is oof or soft from camera shake, and in the second, her eyes are way too dark.

Regards,
Jake

 

[molested_cow]

The first photo is more complimentary. The second and third photos aren't showing the best angles of the model's face (her chin obviously). Perhaps a reflector on the shadow side of her face?

That's all I have to offer for now, need to study the photos more...

 

[Virtuosos]

Yes, yes...try to raise your eyes lol and thanks...I might have her face into the sun or change the angle to get a better light the next time. I agree her face is too dark, I couldn't tell that until it was too late though :/

And I wouldn't be suprised if I had messed up the focus on the first one (or just shaked a wee bit). I was standing in the lake praying that a wave wouldn't knock me off balance lol.

 

[JClishe]

OK so serious question here. The "rule" of portraits is to not cutoff limbs, but how does that apply to boobs? The bottom of her boob is cutoff; seems to me that the framing should be just slightly wider, or pan the camera down since there's empty space at the top.