A Conversation

[rufus5150]

In the original image (admittedly, a snapshot), I had both subjects but when I went to crop, I did this on a whim which put the subjects at the edge and the negative space in the middle. Every time I look at it, I alternate between liking and disliking the composition. So C&C on any aspect, but in particular, I'd be interested in thoughts on whether or not this composition works at all.

And yes, at 2 1/2, because he drives the M&M car, my daughter LOVES Kyle Busch. I apologize in advance.

 

[monkeykoder]

I like the idea of the composition I'm not quite as sure about the execution (and I'm sure you aren't either from your statements) something is a tad off but it shows a direction to go try it again a few times on purpose to see how you like it.