A Couple More Pics From a New Girl to C&C Please

[Knickle25]

Hi guys. I read what you posted on my last pic and thought maybe i did a little better with these pictures? Maybe you can critique these ones as well fo me? All the advice is appreciated and helping me! Thank you in advance!

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[The_Traveler]

#2 is underexposed and too flat. The flatness is caused by using on camera flash which takes all the little modelling micro-shadows out of the face. It also gives that tell-tale beard of shadow and the pin-pint catchlights in the eyes.

#3 is better. Lovely face and mysterious expression but the pose makes the gap at her pants much more prominent and most of the picture doesn't add to the impact of her face. Also underexposed; the camera is fooled by the light in the back.

#1 I don't know what you want me to look at in this picture; I can guess the tower but what about it should attract my eye? The tower looks like it is at a slant, at least according to the pickets in the fence in front of it. The picture is filled with lines that should be vertical or parallel or symmetrical but all these lines are at some angle and there is nothing in the picture that gives me any clue why that is - and that makes it confusing and dissatisfying.