A lil C&C pwease :)

[OffTheWall]

So i thought i would take some shots with my best friends inside of a blue broken toyota outside my house and would like some c&c let me know what you all think.

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[786soul]

Not feeling the ones in the car too much.

The last one is better but shadows a bit too harsh with the shot. I'd soften and while PPing, watch not to overexpose when adding effects.

 

[tirediron]

Interesting idea, but not doing much for me. The last two seem rather over-exposed.

 

[adversus]

I'm not a fan of the processing done on them. The shots in the truck, while I can see what you were trying to do (maybe? good looking female covered in grime?), she's a cute girl, I think you are on the right track with the last one.

 

[OffTheWall]

LOL yeah these were all test shots for a technique i found online. i'll post the "decent ones" in a sec i like the ones in the truck kinda HDR looking sorta kinda lol.

 

[OffTheWall]

Here are the ones that i will give to her

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5= unsure if i like this one

6 don't know if i like the pose or not.

 

[adversus]

4 and 6 are good in my opinion.

 

[786soul]

In that last set you have, #6 is a keeper though I'd crop it a bit tighter on the right hand side. Looks good in B&W

 

[mishele]

#2 is no picture the world should see...lol (dirty mind) She had a good grip!!
#6 is nice

Keep shooting!!!

 

[786soul]

#2 is no picture the world should see...lol (dirty mind) She had a good grip!!

LOL I didn't even notice that hahaha! Oh gawd :lmao::lmao:

 

[mishele]

#2 is no picture the world should see...lol (dirty mind) She had a good grip!!

LOL I didn't even notice that hahaha! Oh gawd :lmao::lmao:

lol that wouldn't be the shot I would want out there...lol

 

[misstwinklytoes]

In the PP it looks like someone beat her entire body with a baseball bat and her bruises are getting to that ugly stage. I much prefer the originals.

 

[LCARSx32]

If I wasn't able to see her face in the first set, I would have thought you had taken pictures of a corpse.

#4 in the second set, her face seems a bit blotchy. Maybe from PP?

 

[DanFinePhotography]

the last set is pretty cool. Like the concept of the first set, a tad overdone however.