Interesting PP,... I have to ask why you went to all the trouble of doing PP 'beautifying' on something was never intended to be a beauty shot anyway?
To me:
** The eye looks Un-natural (smoothing on the whites and tear duct?), You can see a clear circle around the Iris where you may have masked a layer,..
** The lips have lost all surface texture, lips are very emotive, it's a shame to silence them
I like the composition, as it's fairly simple - and the hair on the top right of the frame looks very healthy and nice. Lighting is quite good too - but a lot of dark in the bottom right corner pulling my eye down away from the focus of the picture.
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