Amateur Hour. C&C Please.

[Alter_Ego]

Hey a couple of my friends were doing a fashion show so i thought I'd take a few photos with my 85mm.
These havnt been touched so if you feel like improving them then please do so and show me the results.
My first time doing something like this and i learned a lot from trail and error but some pointers from you guys is always welcomed.

Focus is pretty bad considering i didnt have the lighting down and first one would do with a crop.
Opinions?

 

[tirediron]

They're not bad considering the circumstances. Low-light shoots like this are always difficult, and if you don't have the advantage of prime seating, you have to deal with crappy backgrounds. Watch for things like the disembodied arm in #1 that looks like it's going to grab the fellow's butt, in #2, wait (if you can) for people in the background to be clear of the shot.

 

[Alter_Ego]

Haha yeah i see what you mean. Yeah i guess i could get a tighter crop and clone him out but there brothers and i kept it like this for them to see.