And now for something entirely different!

[Trever1t]

Your thought appreciated. I have mixed feelings. I won't say what I don't like to influence you. Give me your best shot!


_POR4753-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[SnappingShark]

It has a cold look, and I don't really like the top left flower. It looks fake compared to the rest. Otherwise, I like the image.

 

[pgriz]

From the title, I thought you were going to show us a picture of a seagull in a parking lot. Which would be very different from what you normally shoot.

As for this model - that is pretty perfect skin. Very direct closeup portrait. It's somewhat unusual to be so close to see all the little hairs. But really, have no idea what could be bugging you...

 

[Derrel]

I saw other photos of her...she looks very masculine, very mannish to me...and not in a good way. The heavily plucked eyebrows and then the draw-em-back in look...uhhh...weird. The eyeballs look odd too, with very little pupil/iris differentiation. Not really a fan.

 

[Robin_Usagani]

It has a cold look, and I don't really like the top left flower. It looks fake compared to the rest. Otherwise, I like the image.

It is fake.

 

[Trever1t]

ya, I hear ya. Not much I can do about dark eyes, that's a natural fact. BrightByNature nailed what I dislike..that top left flower. Oh well, not every image I work on is a winner.

 

[DanOstergren30 5]

I saw other photos of her...she looks very masculine, very mannish to me...and not in a good way. The heavily plucked eyebrows and then the draw-em-back in look...uhhh...weird. The eyeballs look odd too, with very little pupil/iris differentiation. Not really a fan.

What a lovely critique. :roll:


I think for this shot I would have liked more visible flowers and more forehead. The way it is just seems a bit too tightly cropped for my personal liking.
And I also looked at some of her other photos; she's very lovely and has a unique look that I really enjoy. I've seen some very manly ladies in my time, and she certainly doesn't look mannish to me.

 

[Trever1t]

Thank you

 

[tirediron]

A man with three butto..... oops, sorry, wrong forum. :er:

I think what I'd like to see is the shadow area under her chin covered with some flowers; that dark area seems at odds with the subtle, even lighting of the rest of the face.