Another Model Mayhem shoot

[SabrinaO]

sweet processing! I just wish you didn't cut off her legs and the bike!

 

[Robin Usagani]

Welcome back Sabrina!

 

[SabrinaO]

Welcome back Sabrina!

Thanks sweetie... have I been gone that long? I didn't think people would have noticed...

 

[Robin Usagani]

We were taking bets whether you will be back or not. Pay up suckaa!!!

 

[g-fi]

My drama llama is so happy right now.

 

[SabrinaO]

We were taking bets whether you will be back or not. Pay up suckaa!!!

What? Why would I not come back??? I have a love/hate relationship with this forum! lol

 

[Vtec44]

I'm sad that my thread doesn't have the "attraction" compare to SabrianO's. =(

 

[ManhattanShutterBug]

She's gorgeous, and she looks natural and relaxed. You did a good job on the processing. My only nitpick is that the scooter seems to be more prominent in both shots than she is (mirror and handlebars in front of her).

Perhaps a tiny bit of fill flash would have been good to brighten up her eyes, otherwise no issues with the lighting.

^^^^^

 

[g-fi]

I'm sad that my thread doesn't have the "attraction" compare to SabrianO's. =(

Trust that ten people telling you that you did a great job, and that there's only a few things to tweak for next time is infinitely better than 10 pages of raging stupidity.

Next time you shoot her, you totally gotta get her to toss her hair for you and get it blowing in the wind. It will be EPIC!

 

[Vtec44]

Next time you shoot her, you totally gotta get her to toss her hair for you and get it blowing in the wind. It will be EPIC!

That would be EPIC!... but I will have to ask her to bring a comb or something.

 

[wlbphoto]

i like the lighting on the photos, great work. and yea i'd like to see more too lol

 

[subscuck]

Apart from what others have mentioned, I find the position of her left arm/hand a little awkward. Beautiful model, tho.

 

[Vtec44]

Apart from what others have mentioned, I find the position of her left arm/hand a little awkward. Beautiful model, tho.

In what way do you think that it is awkward and how can I make it better?

 

[subscuck]

Apart from what others have mentioned, I find the position of her left arm/hand a little awkward. Beautiful model, tho.

In what way do you think that it is awkward and how can I make it better?

I think it would have looked more natural if it was, like the other hand, on the seat of the scooter. To me, it looks like it's where it's at because she doesn't know where else to put it. Just looks a little awkward and unnaturally placed. Looks kinda forced. Does that make sense?

 

[Vtec44]

I think it would have looked more natural if it was, like the other hand, on the seat of the scooter. To me, it looks like it's where it's at because she doesn't know where else to put it. Just looks a little awkward and unnaturally placed. Looks kinda forced. Does that make sense?

I see what you're saying. Thanks!