Are you thinking what im thinking? C&C Please!

[SabrinaO]

I don't want to plant the seed, I just want to know what you all think?

Thank you!

 

[SabrinaO]

Just want to let you know...for some reason these look pixelated and extra sharp because of flickrs settings...

 

[Dao]

I do not know other things. But her fore head is quite shiny (esp in #1, #2 and #4). I am no expert as far as makeup concern. Do you think better makeup (for situation like this) can help?

 

[tirediron]

I think I'd like a pizza and be... oh sorry, right, the pictures... Not bad; I'm not sure a red shirt was the best choice if you wanted to really see the red hearts however. The lighting is good, but not quite there yet. I can still see some slight grey tones in your background, and, as mentioned, some over-bright highlights, as well as some annoying shadows (esp. right side (image left) of her face & shoulder in #1). I also think there's a lot of wasted room in #s 1, 2, and 4.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[cgipson1]

Could you post a diagram of how you have the lighting setup, with a description of your gear? http://www.lightingdiagrams.com/Creator . It looks likes it needs to be softened a bit... based on the harshness of the highlights and shadows...

 

[Smitzel269]

To me, the first 2 poses look kind of awkward, like she would never sit like that naturally, it looks uncomfy, but that could be me

 

[redessa]

I'm thinking: The lighting is harsh in all of them.

#1 - It took me a little bit to figure out what she was doing and that it was paper on the floor
#2 - Now I get it, but I can hardly see the hearts cause they almost blend into her shirt
#3 - her shirt is too busy and not doing her body any favors.
#4 - she's not dressed right for that pose. The skirt falling on the left is not helping. I think I can see what you were going for but think it needed to either go sexier or more casual & carefree (she certainly has the legs to pull off sexy). This looks like what she'd wear to the office which doesn't match the mood of how she's posed.

Overall I'd say the staging just seems a little off to me (in addition to the lighting issues).

 

[gsgary]

It looks to me that the background is only lit with 1 light from the lefthand side because the otherside looks muddy' for a good white background you need 2 lights well metered

 

[manaheim]

She seems kinda old for the vibe I'm getting from a lot of the shots.

That's what I was thinking... can't say what you were thinking.

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

I really like these. They seem to have good exposure... And I think you used the "rule of thirds" well. I am also a fan of the white background. The only thing I would change (and this is barely an issue to me), is that I would make your watermark a hair smaller.

Overall... Good job.

 

[H4X1MA]

Not sure there is anything you could have done about this, but in #2 it looks like the hearts are part of her shirt and she's just holding her hands in the air. #4 looks the most genuine IMO