Back to my roots (possible NWS self port)

[MyaLover]

My latest.... Im on the fence on this one. C&C always appreciated:

 

[tirediron]

I like everything except the way your left arm looks; for some reason it looks out of proportion.. great work however. You've got an amazing talent for this sort of thing.

 

[MyaLover]

Thank you! And yes hahahahaha i didnt notice but it does look like i have a little baby arm!

 

[motorshooter]

Your not even near a fence in this image:lmao:

I like it, with the exception of that left arm and the light line around the neck

 

[Alpha]

Not totally digging the facial expression. I know you're going for high contrast, but I think a little more highlight detail would go a long way.

 

[yamadak13]

I love your hair, gorgeous. I like the pic, but I think it is a little too soft around your left leg. I know you want it that way a little, but I just don't think there is enough definition there. Very beautiful though.

 

[MyaLover]

Thank you!

 

[Big Mike]

I like the composition, but the crop feels a little too tight.

 

[MightyLeeMoon]

Very cool concept. I'm also confused by how your left arm turned out that way. Are you laying on a black blanket? It seems like maybe the blanket is covering edges of you here and there and giving a weird sort of allusion.

 

[MyaLover]

I think it is the angle.. and then rotating it made it look odd.... Since you pointed it out, its all I can stare at. Ill post new ones