- Joined
- Jul 8, 2005
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- Location
- Victoria, BC
- Website
- www.johnsphotography.ca
- Can others edit my Photos
- Photos OK to edit
Things that strike me: Background highlights are too hot by at least a full stop, try and keep the figers together; hand positioning is fine (IMO), but keep the fingers together and generally pointed up (as in #1) or down (#2), rather than right at the viewer. #2 is a bit too much of a 'football shoulders' pose for; 20 degrees to one side or the other would be better. #3 is very nice; lovely lighting, BUT the background really hurts it (IMO).