It looks like someone punched her in the eye #1...to me anyway. The poses are just kinda...dead and lifeless and if you were going for that you acomplished it. Would she open her eyes? I think 3 with a some better lighting and her looking right out of the picture would wonderful. Next time don't chop her fingers off like in #1 and 3 (trust me, I struggle with this to!). It looks like your focus fell on her hand in #2 and #3 and right smack dab on her chest in #4 Left her face looking a little soft.