[Blanc et Noir]

[Shad]

There was a sleeping train.

Sleeping girl.

Cover her eyes.

Not to see the pain..

~*~

I was in pain when i take this photo shoot with my beloved model. It' raining and dark sky.

I was use canon kissx4 and lens 50 1,8

 

[DiskoJoe]

I like your model, i like her outfit, but I think your choice of locations is not on point with the other two. What about her looks scream out let go to the train yard? Trainyards are for punk kids in hoodies running around spray painting graffiti not girl in black lacy dresses.

 

[c.cloudwalker]

I personally like to put things together that are not supposed to go together

And I think it works well here. I like them. Not all equally but overall very nice.

#2 is my favorite. Broken doll left by the train tracks...

And you have some very nice tones in most of them.

 

[Shad]

thanks you ^^

 

[c.cloudwalker]

If you want to thank me, tell us a bit more about the idea behind these shots. I can see them as a photo story, kinda like a comic book but with photos.

I'm working on a couple of those myself and I'm always interested in what other people are doing. And if that's not what you are doing at all, that's ok too.

But I'd like to know more.

 

[Robin Usagani]

I think the shots arent wide enough. It could use more higher tones.

 

[c.cloudwalker]

I think the shots arent wide enough. It could use more hire tones.

Your specialty is making statements that are not backed by anything...

Would you care to elaborate?


What's a hire tone?

 

[DiskoJoe]

I personally like to put things together that are not supposed to go together

And I think it works well here. I like them. Not all equally but overall very nice.

#2 is my favorite. Broken doll left by the train tracks...

And you have some very nice tones in most of them.

There is nothing wrong with mixing opposites. But here the photog was going for a theme. I am wondering how the trainyard play into the theme of darkness and despair that he was trying to achieve. Dont get me wrong, the photos are of good quality.

 

[Robin Usagani]

sorry.. higher.

It is not wide enough. What cant you understand? Like they are barely fit in to the frame. No reason to cut off the dress when you can almost fit it. #1 her head is almost on the edge.

I think the shots arent wide enough. It could use more hire tones.

Your specialty is making statements that are not backed by anything...

Would you care to elaborate?


What's a hire tone?

 

[DiskoJoe]

I think the shots arent wide enough. It could use more hire tones.

Your specialty is making statements that are not backed by anything...

Would you care to elaborate?


What's a hire tone?

Lighting - High Key and Low Key | DIYPhotography.net

 

[8ball]

I love it! Everyone of them!

 

[NeoPho]

Amazing! what mode did you shoot these with. Iso, aperture, shutter terspeed etcetera. Ajy lighting reflectors and why not?

Im newb but beautiful photos are beautiful photos. Thumbs up!