C&C portrait

[MolitorPhotography]

Here is a shot I took about 6 weeks ago, I haven't been able to decide if I like it or not. Posing people is not my strong suit and I need to get better, so any tips on that would be great

 

[Nevermore1]

The first thing that I notice is that her head is almost completely blocking his face.

 

[Stradawhovious]

The man's face is hidden, and IMHO they are both very underexposed. Limbs are cut off and there is a phantom hand under the woman's chest. The distortion through the man's glasses is also very distracting. In addition to all that, they both seem to be very disinterested in having a portrait taken.

Sorry to say, this one might be best served being put in the circular file.

 

[MolitorPhotography]

Thanks for the scrutiny, sometimes I look at so many pictures at once I lose focus. Here is one I liked from this shoot. does it stand up any better, or am I just off? Any tips for shooting someone who wears specs?