How much did you crop it?
Can you also add a copy of the original?
what were you focusing on and what was your focusing mode ?
f/2.8 will give a very shallow DOF which is what you may be concerned about.
it looks pretty good to me when I zoom in but as you can tell the wind was blowing, so 1/250 might have been a bit too slow considering in relation to her hair (and the aperture).
EXIF :
Camera: Canon EOS 7D Mark II
Lens: 70-200mm f/2.8
Shot at 200 mm
Exposure: Auto exposure, Program AE, 1/250 sec, f/6.3, ISO 100
Flash: On, Fired