1: pulled this one off! Might have been better with a darker background. The shallow DOF makes this one.
2 and 3 are the best of the bunch. They look like candids, light is good, background on two is great.
4 just another cute baby shot, nothing wrong with it but nothing special either.
5. does mom like the editing or the expression? There are several spots that are blown completely out. The hot spots need to be bigger or smaller depending on your intention. Mom might love you forever if you put the color back into just the eyes. (yes its old but people still like it)
6. I don't like anything about this except your concept. High key idea is good. Don't like the expression, his eye's look "funny" highlights are blown out in several places and the big aperture works against you here because his ear is out of focus and in a prominant place in the frame.
thanks for all yout comments and suggestions. I appreciate you taking your time in giving me your advice and thoughts. A lot of my shots are candid. I don't like to be very posed with children rather than 'catch' them being themselves. It's what most of my clients like the best. Of course I do throw in some 'look here and smile' pictures but it's not my favorite way to do it.

I only like to shoot adults that way.
in number 5 - i like the editing style of Amy Wenzel -
www.amywenzel.com she uses very bright, bold pp and sometimes her stuff is so blown that it loses even important detail. This childs mom said she loves the 'different' look to it and she ordered this in print in mutliple sizes and quantities - you never know i guess.

I thought about adding the color to the eyes but I did some of those when i first learned how and i have come to just really not like selective color for some reason. I should though, give one to mom - you're right she might love it.
And uh oh - there was no concept to the last one - it was completely candid. He woke up from his nap as soon as i got there and laid his head on the pillow and I just took it. Again mom's favorite.. I know I shot that one pretty wide - Very low light - no WAY i was repositioning this kid to get him into better lighting because I personally love the look on his face.
But that's maybe just me
Thanks again for all the time you put into letting me know your thoughts.