Couple photos from my second wedding!

lbowser · Oct 14, 2013

Any CC is welcome, want to make sure they are good enough/worth giving to the bride and groom.

Thank you.

tirediron · Oct 14, 2013

Not bad; I find them cropped a little tight for my taste, and some 'racoon eye' happening, but other than that, I'm sure they'll appreciate them.

lbowser · Oct 14, 2013

Here are a couple more, CC much appreciated!

MatthewSimes · Oct 14, 2013

I know it's usually general form to have the brides and bridesmaids hold their bouquets a bit lower, so try to keep an eye on that as far as posing goes.

lbowser · Oct 14, 2013

MatthewSimes said:
I know it's usually general form to have the brides and bridesmaids hold their bouquets a bit lower, so try to keep an eye on that as far as posing goes.

Thank you for that tip! Will definitely keep that in mind next time!

DiskoJoe · Oct 14, 2013

These are pretty tight shots. I would pan out a bit more especially on a big guy like this. But the thing that really bugs me the most here and is something that you should watch for like a hawk is to make sure that the people are actually looking into the camera. There are lots of the shots were the groom is not looking into the camera. The last shot there of the bride and groom really shows what I am talking about. She is staring right into the camera like you want and who knows what he is staring at.

Like this, all eyes on the camera.

brides maids bw by DiskoJoe, on Flickr

marie1128 · Oct 14, 2013

The thing that is bugging me about the third picture is the groom's feet/legs. They need to be closer together, and all three of the men's legs need to be uniform. The groomsman on the left is perfect IMO (minus that he looks like he is about to say something rather than smiling, but that's not the bigger deal to me here).

marie1128 · Oct 14, 2013

Oh, and I LOVE the ring shot. Very creative!

lbowser · Oct 14, 2013

DiskoJoe said:
These are pretty tight shots. I would pan out a bit more especially on a big guy like this. But the thing that really bugs me the most here and is something that you should watch for like a hawk is to make sure that the people are actually looking into the camera. There are lots of the shots were the groom is not looking into the camera. The last shot there of the bride and groom really shows what I am talking about. She is staring right into the camera like you want and who knows what he is staring at. Like this, all eyes on the camera. http://www.flickr.com/photos/diskojoe/7151162801/ brides maids bw by DiskoJoe, on Flickr

Yes this is great advice and it was bugging me too in some shots.. I found it hard being the second shooter to get all eyes at me (no excuse though, I should have been a little more vocal though, a quick "right here guys!" Might have made all the difference.) definitely something for me to keep in mind for next time, thank you!!

lbowser · Oct 14, 2013

marie1128 said:
The thing that is bugging me about the third picture is the groom's feet/legs. They need to be closer together, and all three of the men's legs need to be uniform. The groomsman on the left is perfect IMO (minus that he looks like he is about to say something rather than smiling, but that's not the bigger deal to me here).

Great thank you!! I do agree.. I maybe could have placed myself better as well..
And thank you, I do love the ring shots!!

lbowser · Oct 14, 2013

One of the smaller guests.. Who had big musical talent. To get the bride and groom to kiss you had to sing a song with the word 'love' in it.. She wanted to sing all night! Such a cutie